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This is part two to the Expanding date story. Kate and Derrick go on their date and Kate gets a bit more than she asked for. Part three should be up very soon. Please leave comments and suggestions, I'm a growing writer and need all the Comments and criticism I can get.

See you guys later :3
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This was good ^^ I really enjoyed the flow.

The only thing that distracted me was your use of the word 'jeered'. It didn't really make sense in context, because that lady really does not seem to be making fun of her.